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Shattered Self Image

I stand silently
In front of the mirror
Studying myself
I want to see me
The same as you
But I only see
The same as you do
I smash my reflection
To watch myself break
Just to feel like you
To see what satisfaction
You always take
In watching me fall apart
If I destroy myself
Like myself in the mirror
I wonder what
Will you think of me then?

Please tell me what you think

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  • Lady Altheia
    January 2, 2009

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    We never like what we see because others are so critical of us. Onl you can change your imabge of yourself.


  • AaronGott
    January 1, 2009
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    deep. i enjoyed it.