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A Mime Outside the Box

I am a
Mime
Outside the box
Thinking, pondering, contemplating
And the only thing that comes to mind is the
Future
It is immense, vast, daunting
It swells with a power unimaginable
Like thinking outside of a box is supposed to be
And when it arrives
I am consumed
And digested
And am left alone to
Think, ponder, contemplate
And since I have no beginning
And since I have no end
And since I only ever return to the middle
I was never outside that box to begin with
I am without a purpose
I am unmoving
Much like a rebel without a cause
And this only solidifies my need to see that film
From which perhaps I might gain insight
And figure out
What I am
To do

Author notes

Pretty much sums up how I feel about life and my place in life right now. Saw the contest, and figured I might as well enter. Hope you enjoyed it.

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  • lunarlunacy
    December 31, 2008

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    enjoy i did and be sure to watch that flick, the middle RWOC is slow cinematically but its where the meat of the matter is at.


    • Indrid Cold
      January 5
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      Thank you for the encouragement, I truly appreciate it.

      And, I am glad you enjoyed it. Sorry the explanation box was rather blunt.