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Its lovely to be hyper

 

When I agreed on cutting back,

I didn't know you meant it all,

How can I survive with out it!

 

I need my monthly chocolate,

And sugar on my banana,

Then we have my coco!

 

I do agree all the sugar,

Makes me wee bit hyper,

And I start to imagine.

 

But listen now mum,

This truly did happen,

Those aliens made me!

 

Its all they're fault,

Don't blame me,

It really did happen.

 

             ...Its lovely to be hyper

 

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Prompt: 1. I was abducted by aliens and forced to eat sugar.

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  • penman gold member
    January 3
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    January 1

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    ooh that's right go ahead and blame those poor aliens.. what did they do to deserve it?? huh.. huh?? I love this poem, its wonderful. and yes it is lovely to be hyper.. so if you were abducted by aliens and are now hyper what why am I like that??? hmmm I don't consume that much sugar or do I? lol

    good luck in the contest my dear daughter
    mommy


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    January 1

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    This put a smile upon my face. I have to admit I laughed at it. Aliens. ha ha. Good luck in the contest... ~~Iridessa~~