As the maiden cried,
Her heart so full of sorrow.
What was she to do.
The loss of a loved one,
At times life seemed cruel.
For the loss was so real.
Time alone could heal the pain.
Still the friend was a loss.
In her heart would always remain.
Death will comes to us all.
Fear not when a loved ones falls.
God alone knows who He will calls.
A tear for all will always remain,
For all the loved ones just the same.
All in all they will remain in our heart
With love they will be just moments away.
They are the friend who just stepped away.
Waiting for us to come their way.
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picture link
http://www.flicker.com/photos/cysera/390432897
A contest entry
- Pictures And Quotes Prompts by Sandygram.
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Comments
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You captured the sorrow in the picture quite well. A very heartfelt poem with wonderful imagery. A delight to read this morning. Thank you for entering our contest. Best of luck. Take care. Sandy
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Lots of "L"s the alliteration is wonderful. The consistent ear to sound aspect works off the tongue. The image comliment the nature of the poem and content pacing. Thanks for entering our contest and good luck
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wonderful
that is amazingly so true. you cut into reality with beautifully selected words that speak so much for themselves. thank you so much for sharing this one piece. it relates to so many.
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