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New Year

Oh here we go


Never just sit back
Don't wait for love
Cause baby its right here
I have been here the whole time
Just open your eyes

I know you're kinda oblivious
But come on boy
Can't you see
How crazy I am about you

The lights of the city
Means nothing
When I look in your eyes
Maybe I'm
Just a little too crazy

Hopeful heartbeats
Are all  I have
Just take a listen
To the speeding
Beats of my heart

Sing along to my song
Just take a breath
And breath me in
I can't control
My words anymore

I'm screaming from the rooftops
I love you
Baby there you go
You know its true
I know you could
See it all along

Oh here we go
Never just sit back
Don't wait for love
Cause baby its right here
I have been here the whole time
Just open your eyes

Author notes

YAY 2009

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Comments


  • Darknesskid
    January 2
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    so far 09 sux for me =(


  • by who
    December 31, 2008

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    Clever

    I had a feeling someone was going to do this, and I kinda wished I had

    Good poem, I enjoyed it. I can kind of relate, I've been on both ends.