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you don't know what you just threw away

 

You never gave me the reason

why I became last place.

You didn't even stop to

wipe the dirty tears off my face.

Or erase the crimson mistake,

like you used to.

 

I can't understand why I invested so much

with someone who deserved so little.

This is how you treat a heart?

Since when did I do anything to make you

second-guess that I loved what we had.

 

All the words you say,

make me want to not even try to fix this

but just walk away.

[you said I was your greatest mistake]

 

If you want to find me,

you know where to look.

Just look for pieces of my heart

and all the years you took.

 

I'll be there.

 

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  • GypsyEyes
    March 4

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    oh you are fantastic for this poem. i love the first stanza in this poem. it is what happened to me. this is great. thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 6

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    awesome write! very sad but reality
    great work

  • Wow

    That is definately bitter and sad. Well painted with words. Good job.

  • wow beautiful. good luck

  • so powerful

    i really loved the voice of the girl (?? im assuming its a girl, sry if its not) and how her personality really shines through. she seems so real. and her situation seems real also. i can really connect. awesome write, thank u so much for entering!!

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