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Fuck it

 

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The freaken south sun wasn't magical,

And the beaches wasn't full of boobs,

And who the hell stole my drink?

 

No fuck this, I am going back home.

The cold ice and snow is more me,

This was just too crappy to live.

 

                    ...You stole my drink!

 

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  • Jesann gold member
    January 14
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    "And who the hell stole my drink"
    Good one...like it !!!
    Well done.


  • thejollytinker
    January 5
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    Stealing drinks? Grounds for dismissal, says daddy! So fun!

  • Nice little poem. Very well done.

    Mike

  • ROFLMAO!!! I swear I didn't do it.. lol ok maybe I pushed you a wee bit in that direction.. I absolutely love this poem .. you made me laugh really hard and its only 11AM

    and btw what proof do you have that I am the one that stole your drink huh huh huh??

    outstanding poem. I really love it

    good luck
    kat

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