Nick please don't play me
Just like them guitar strings
'Cause baby I can't begin to tell
When I heard your voice, I knew Kurt would tell...I didn't know I was going to get this much Hell
Hearing your voice-- and what joy it truly brings
Baby please don't play me
Like all the others
And string the pretty girl along
'Cause Nick I am falling in love with you
...Maybe I shouldn't have told you...
Maybe we are both wrong
When you say 'i love you'
Is it just a lie?
I want to be your baby girl
And be your everything
I want to make you happy
Both sick and sweet
As long as I can take it
May it be your treat
Everyday I want to wake up and see you
I want to look into your eyes
I want to feel your lips up against mine
Only a feeling that is meant to feel so Divine
At this point I don't care if you were true to me
As long as our 'love' and sex made me redefined
Nick will you mend me?
Bring me back to life?
Fall in love with me,
Just like how I could be with you
As we meet in real life
Nick---I love you
Your voice nourishes my shattered heart
Make this yearn only a making
Let these emotions only be a start
'I want you to want me,
I need you to need me
I want you to love me'
Why can't these feelings be anymore discreet
I want you for Christmas
I'll be wearing a bow,
my treat
Nick make my dream come true
All I want for Christmas is you
You hold the key to my heart
Take me and break me
From this love lock down
If you truly love me
please
♥?♥
Author notes
So there was/is this guy ... I'm not really sure if I am falling in love with him... I don't think I'm there yet... but this one's for him. 
I have no idea if he'll like it... I wrote it around one am on Christmas Day ...
It's a bit raw to me... typing it up, was hmm, since I was kicked out and reading again in the past week... I was going wow [and in parts, what?!?] truly --- I can't give you the words on that one... I know it needs work, I know its out of meter, but I hope everything else didn't seem too forced... I meant to tweak some dirty pretty into as well.
Let me have your spin on it. Thanks for reading.
how much help does it need?
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Well......
...being the father figure....the thing about sex and not sure if you love them is a little upsetting! The write overall is OK, but you should spell check. If you don't feel the poem is worth it, how are we supposed to think it's worth it! The feelings here show a young look at love. This is really lust, but we all went through it. I'd hold off on the sex for a while so you don't have children at a young age, but good luck! The Shaker
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I think it's great that you're starting to move on, but I just hope you're not in rebound mode and get hurt
I love you and this is really personal, I feel sort of bad for reading.
Take care love.
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thanks sis. ...I don't think I am in 'rebound' ...it's something I don't let myself go though ... what made you feel bad writing this for though?
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Bad for reading silly
It seems very private write.
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ehh. idk... i showed him the poem and he's been distant since. ... hopefully he can be striaght with me... >:\ but in a sence, it is a cute poem, right?
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Yes
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