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December Warmth

One week's warmth is all I have.
Each year's bloom seems shorter still.
Many pass, but one girl smiles.
Only one may ever pause.
Only one may ever see.
One moment, a fragrant memory.
All I need, a Lillac in December.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 19
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    Oooh yeah well... December certainly isn't warm over here in England.


  • hawkeslake gold member
    January 1

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    Very nicely done -- especially if you are still up north -- it is 6 degrees F. here in MN -- your poem brings a bit of warmth, and lilacs are my favorite flower!