I just can't stop, thinking
of all the things that have happened!
They keep on runnin' through my head,
popin' out here and there.
I can't control whats happenin'
everything is so fast,
too fast.
For me to catch up too!
I kept on trying to think whats right
and whats wrong.
But it kept on slipping off the tip of my tongue!
Answers ran away,
they wouldn't stay long enough
for me to know what to say!
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I may add on, maybe this would make a nice song?
I have addded and now i need an idea for a chorus and more lines!
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I like the last stanza!
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I like the song idea..that might work really well. You should deffiantly add on to it...and maybe make some sort of chorus or refrain.
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i've added on! please tell me what you think now!
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Cool...I like the last new verse
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awesome! Hey seasonings if you finsih it i could put a tune to it...that would be fun!
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that would be kewl then too YOUTUBE!
and i have added on tell me what u thnik!
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I like the song idea and the poem!
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i have added on!
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I think it would make a excellent song!
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i've added on!
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