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Hollace Baughman



Hollace Baughman is seventy three years old.
Just last week we fell a two hundred foot fir.

Fifteen thousand pounds of canopy broke off
when the teeth of the saw ate into the holding wood.

I tapped his shoulder turned and ran like hell.
The tree crashed and missed Hollace by a foot.

In the silence we stood there until he turned
and in his Arkansas accent said "That was close."

He was a champion log cutter in his younger days.
Had a chainsaw made out of a snowmobile engine.

Could slice through three foot of tree in three seconds.
He smokes a cigarette and we finish cutting the tree.

I am glad he can still move like lightning because
he wife is only forty years old and would blame me.

I can say he has lived on the far edge all his life
and the years I've known him he's never raised his voice.

He always keeps a slight smile on his face, always greets
strangers with a direct look and a nod of his head.

We share a flask of home grown whiskey and it is smooth.
If he was not a lumberjack he could run moonshine.

"We need to go hunting again." He tells me. "High up where
the big bulls are."  I nod. 'It's quite a hike.'

"No problem." Hollace smiles. "I have you to carry the skillet."
There is nothing better than humor from an old friend.

There is nothing better than a friend who knows how to live.





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  • Aajdj
    April 1
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    NICE

    YOU MIGHT GET INTO THE FINALIST


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 3

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    Oh man, living indeed....such a character you ahve portrayed and I am sure eveyr reader has a face in their head that fits this man. Wonderfully done and yes.......dance til you drop!


  • FransB gold member
    January 3

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    I enjoyed

    this. It has that happy sad ring to it. It tells of 'pure' friendship and its strength - it will always be there. Let us learn from this. Frans

  • imahealer
    January 1

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    Your are very convincing in your rare humor. The elderly who stay happy and healthy, can lighten any situation and love living on the edge. Beautifully constructed tale from start to finish. Happy New Year's Poet!
    LINDA


  • Night Hope gold member
    January 1

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    Sounds like my stepdad. Same humor, too. Good luck in Carol's contest, Poet. Happy New Year to you & yours.

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