Lying here in the darkness of our room
heart upon heart, two beating as one
a classic tune so fine that emits our love
while in each others arms bonded close.
Words I've spoken only begin to express
the love I've always felt when I'm with you
the ultimate of passioniate consumation
as my heart embraces yours even closer.
To you, I gave my greatest gift of all
a love from inside my soul exploding
erupting from inside me to capture you
while so easily able to consume your heart.
Still you open you arms so wide to me
beckoning me in, expressing that you feel
that same love, willing to share it in whole
as you whisper to me, goodnight my love!
Please tell me what you think
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awe-some
wow. this is a great poem. it shows love in so many different lights, and not just the common conception but rather, your true realtion to it. i liked it alot
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To you, I gave my greatest gift of all
a love from inside my soul exploding
erupting from inside me to capture you
while so easily able to consume your heart.
soooo sweet.
this is a beautiful poem.
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