Two lovers arm in arm
twirl about the floor
the music serenades each & every step
guiding them along life's path
Eyes locked, souls connect
romantic sighs
left in whispers
her heart melts
his entwines
beating as one, in unison
the Music stops
yet they continue on
Love encased its grasp
these two lovers
dancing their waltz
for eternity
at last
Author notes
http://www.playlist.com/results.php?site=http://jimbrownla.com&links=4869d36ab0d48ce349b735d39c39fb578f10098bc1e08656be77d527cfcfed74456c5a4dcaf5e3e8665c7b27ea8a60c4f9a7111d585ff8752016f8330a&originallink=http://jimbrownla.com/Jim_Blog/audio/chopin_romantic_piano.mp3
That link is to "Romantic Piano" by Chopin...
Hope this is something you're looking for....it's great music regardless...
A contest entry
- Music and Romance (BIG BIG PTS) by Aisades.
3500 points, ended January 1, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is one thing that stood out in this poem?
Comments
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fantastic as usual
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Love Chopin...and your words paint the picture in my mind perfectly...
Love,
Stacy
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Thank you Daizee, I'm glad that I was able to paint a beautiful picture for you, Chopin is a great artist and I love listening to all the classical composers. they help me with my writing!
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ahhhhhhhh
This poem just made me melt! It's so angelically beautiful and cased with such romantic language. Encore! Encore! Encore!
Loved it.
Rachael
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Aww thank you so much for the wonderful comment! I'm glad that you enjoyed this piece so much!
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This was so so beautiful. Congrats on the silver
Take care
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SO LOVING AND SWEET!!!!
Ah, and they are still dancing on air! If only love could be this way of all of us 
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Very well written my friend, and the shiny is well deserved also.
Marvellous indeed
All the best to you
Ken
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Very well written, and a touching piece. My best wishes.
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I like this. The flow needs some tweaking but the content and metaphor is beautiful. VERY nice.
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This is so beautiful and a great thought
for this prompt my friend! All the best to
you in this contest!
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thanks bud I really didn't like this write...but figured whether I like it or not needs to be posted.
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