I met you as a stranger
I took you as a friend
all i wanted was
that you'd stay til the end.
But after college started
you completely changed
now you back from holiday
you havent even rang.
I actually thought that
when i met you...you'd be there
i never ever thought
you'd leave me...so bare.
Now everyday i cry about it
i even cry myself to sleep
i thought it was my fault
our friendship you didnt want to keep.
I still think its my fault
that you no longer talk to me
but you cant see inside,
what it really does to me.
Everyday i still think about you
even though ive moved on
i still wish that you'd come back
and i wish you'd never gone.
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starving4perfection
A contest entry
- Broken Sadness by SunDew.
1200 points, ended February 26, 2009, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this is about one of my best friends...who meant the world to me....i'd known her for about 4-5years =] we go to different colleges now but she just completely changed after she started college =[
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On one hand, your best friend may realize what has happened, & come back to you, explain it all, maybe even apologize, & y'all can reconcile.
On the other hand, though, she may never do so.
One thing you can be sure of: it's not your fault. Unless you did something unspeakable, & from your poem, it doesn't seem that you did, this change is all her doing, with none of the blame on your shoulders.
It would kill me if my best friend, Ann, ever did that to me. I can't imagine. I have lost best friends, yes, but Ann was given to me by God, so, somehow, if I lost her, it would be much worse.
Thanks for sharing & good luck!
~Bright Cheetah
P.S. I need your s/n, please.
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This is so sad, you have been through so much shit, and unfortunatly people do change and usually not for the better :'( but that is nothing to do with you, it is NOT your fault. I promise you that much.
I met you as a stranger
I took you as a friend........Genius words! My favourite part of this poem. Love it! xxxxxxxxxxxxxx -
Awe, this is so sad this is a touching write. it will be okay hopefully she will go back to normal :] don't give up hope I know you miss her but a new year is coming so maybe she will realize something.
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