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Distortion

Something so beautiful
So simple and plain
Is distorted by hurt
And drops of rain

A whimsical place
That once found peace
Now is dried up
And will soon cease

In search of truth
Finally finding this place
Beautifully restored
By such great grace

Now letting go
And waiting to move on
This once gentle place
Sings a new song

Author notes

The artist is John Jarvis

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  • oceanbluize
    December 31, 2008

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    An outstanding piece that moves the soul. The imagery is grand to say the least...your words penned speak volumes.
    Thank you for entering,
    Best of luck!
    Ocean.