We could fly.
I swing outwards,
feeling the wind on my face...
We could touch the clouds.
I wonder how this would be different
from flying on your own,
without these kiddy-swings propelling us...
We could breathe.
What would happen
if we just let go?
Author notes
Prompt:
http://angelreich.deviantart.com/art/Merry-Go-Round-39667657
- By angelreich at deviantart.com
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Comments
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awww great choice of words here.
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A wonderfully penned piece to ponder upon.
Thanks for sharing here, bravo.
Peace, Timothy.
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This is good, especially the end. Kind of ended with a question making me wonder and wanting more.
Such fresh ideas.
I like
Thank you for entering.
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awesome write...so refreshing and inspiring. I really love this piece
good luck
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