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Connecting Dots

They tell me, "The world is a sewer."

          That's not entirely a lie.

We're all just leaves and water droplets
clinging to the gutter,
          and most of us will end up
falling in the downspout, anyway.

          They tell me, "It's eat, or be eaten."

So many are 'eaten,'
so many never look up -
          so many never see the stars -

because they're too busy eating,
but are somehow oblivious to the fact
that they're being eaten
at the same time.

We have to fight for breath
in this infestation of our world -
          but what if
you could simply float?

          That's how the Greeks must have done it,
flying up to the top, where the air is clear,
and flitting from star to star
until they name every one,
knew every one,

made history.

I can see the stars
but to make my own constellations
all I need to do
is hold up my tracing paper
          and connect the dots.

Author notes

Prompt:

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars."
— Oscar Wilde

Title ideas welcome.

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  • Aowena
    January 3
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    Nicely done. Congrats on the silver.


  • badnovocaine
    January 2

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    Oh my! I loved this, and I can definently see this write has a personality all on its own.
    I loved it.