I loved you unconditional,
My heart you broke in two.
High School Sweet hearts,
I thought be would always be.
You told me you loved me,
Only me.
You said you would marry me,
Oh how happy you did make me.
Holding me for hours,
Your arms around me,
It was my confort zone.
One I will never forget.
Until one day,
you ripped my heart in two.
You told me it was over,
You loved me no more.
The girl next door,
Had stolen you heart.
It was no longer mine,
That day you torn my world apart.
My dreams were stolen,
My heart was broken,
My life had come to an end.
My life to never be the same again.
Since our parting,
I have never loved another,
The way that I loved you.
My love was unconditional,
I would have forgiven, and forgotten.
Thats what love is.
I let you go as they say,
To never come back to my arms again.
I loved then, I love you now,
I will love you until the end.
Author notes
Written February 11th, 2004
A contest entry
- From deep within by -saved-.
300 points, ended February 13, 2004, 16 entries
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Ohhhh! This is so sad! I can just feel the emotion pouring out of it as I read. Unfortuantly I can relate to this all to well. I wish you all the luck in getting over this guy. I'm told that it doesn't hurt forever! Great write!
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oh that makes my eyes water! wow this is so sad and so very true for many people...you would like my poetry...uhh you would like "no heart," and a couple of my other poems "the sad fall" those two prolly anywayz i loved this...gosh it reminds me a lot of what i'm going through...i hope things turn out better for you friend i'm here if ya need someone to talk too my name is jacki. Je t'aime au revoir
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This poem is sweet and beautiful. I liked this poem. It's touching, and just sweet.... Good write. Keep it up; keep going.... And good luck in my contest. Laters.
~Lost~
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