Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

An Icy Slip

“Hang on to the handrail, kids –
the footbridge is

slicker than snot on a pump handle!”




Author notes

Spoken in exasperation after she slipped, but we never let her forget it!

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • oldpoets
    February 7
    Edit | Reply
    cute. I always enjoy the short writes. You seem to enjoy writing them, ice work.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    January 9
    Edit | Reply
    LMAo this is fabulous, gotta love those mums hey, gave me a good giggle. Best to you in the contest

  • ea silver member
    January 3
    Edit | Reply
    Oh, that's a good one.


  • guardianhost gold member
    December 31, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Laughing out loud!

    This little jewel just popped out of the page!
    It reminded me of home and Uncle Haley on the farm - thank you for the unexpected laugh!