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My Other Self





Keeps quite
while I'm enraged.

Mistakes happen,
and I'm to blame.

Leaves me nothing;
emptiness....

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15 words and you prompt is "UNSIGNED"

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • fernandafreire
    January 3

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    Yeah I belive that we all find another self within us.
    Just like there are two sides of a coin.
    Well done with this one!!

    Cheers,
    Fayfreire


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 31, 2008

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    Very sad and a great thought that you've
    penned here. Good luck to you with it!




    Jeremy0826


  • Unsigned gold member
    December 31, 2008
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    Oh...painfull thoughts indeed...

    Very well done and good luck


    Simon


  • Riftkin gold member
    December 31, 2008
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    Interesting take on the prompt .. best wishes to you with this in the contest.

    Joann