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Thumping Beats

I sat in the car
Crack danced
In my corduroy jacket
To thumping rap beats
Gangsta style
With my movie star hair
And too tight jeans
Flaying side to side
Chest popping
Hips grinding
For the entire song

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  • macandrew
    January 30

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    A sweet ride.

    John
  • Bruce silver member
    January 6

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    I thought this was excellent. Very visual. One thing I noticed - should it be Gangsta rather than Gansta?


  • kirbysman Moderators member
    January 1

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    I can sort of picture this - of course I'd picture it in the Malibu since that's the car I remember. Probably in the car waiting for the M2L meeting to start. Tee hee. Very descriptive ma'am.