invisible fields of
magnetic passion
hypnotize oblivious eyes
in bewilderment they gaze
into an alien nation of awe
spouting particules of potency
whipped by a galaxy of enchantment
evoking hormones to tango
in the dance of mystic life
Creating whirlpools of intensity
that ignite forward motion
as misguided entities collide
and burst into starlights of flames
which adds flavor or spice
to an otherwise mundane existence
in a world inundated by foolish pursuits
that's why the dogs chases the cat
and the cat the rat
because we're just players in
the great theater of life
A contest entry
- Opposites Attract by amysticwriter.
2300 points, ended January 14, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The fun is in the chase...no one wants to get caught or be caught...The fun would cease and reality would be the winner...not always a bad thing...like this...
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LOL
I had to stop by after reading the title
Good luck u are indeed a handfull
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well written!!!!! Truly a very fantastic write!!!! I love the imagery in this piece!!! Ur details and descriptions are soooo perfect!!!! Well portrayed!!!! I love it!!!
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thumbs uo
as misguided entities collide
and burst into starlight's of flames
excellent
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oh yeah..
l.o.l. u know your title drew me in! l.o.l. instantly 'atomic dog' played in my head, so u know i just had to find out what you said!!
hot my man!!
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