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Unconditional Love

In just one night of passion,
You were a gift to me.
To carry for nine months,
And shape your every being.

God gave woman the greatest gift of all,
To carry a child, and love completely.

I felt your every move.
You hiccuped for hours,
And kicked as I tried to sleep.
I felt your punches right in the ribs.

But, I wouldn't have change it...
Not for once moment at all.

18 and half hours of
Unbelievable pain,
Couldn't have given me,
any more joy in the world.

The first time I heard your cry,
The fist time I saw your sweet and innocent face,
It gave me the greatest joy,
Only a woman would know.

A gift from God,
A gift of Love,
A Child the symbol of unconditional love.

Author notes

A child is the greatest give and one that will make you smile, make you cry, make you made, but in the end it makes you a proud mother.
Written February 11th, 2004

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  • dragongurl
    February 12, 2004
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    ohhh that is sweet.......though i dont understand it since i'm only 13 but i understand it in a since.......
    thanks for entering!!
    dragongurl