i whispered
flaws of our society
in your ear
then screamed
pleas on deaf ears
Author notes
15 words
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Comments
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a well-rounded & simple piece
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It is a shame, that your words are so true.
Well Done
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Screamed, due to the fact you realised you and the person you told have them too? Very strong and expressive write here, I can definately see where you are coming from here as our society is more than just flawed, it's ... Fractionalised into tiny pieces of deception and self destruction. Ce la vie
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