I want you in many ways
For many more days
Til I no longer see the suns rays
Til death do us part
You will forever have my heart
Always have from the very start
Forever in your arms
Smiling at your charms
Keeping me safe from all the harms
From swaying to our favorite song
To making love all night long
I know nothing can go wrong
So as we exchange our vows today
There is one last thing for me to say
I love you baby, now take me away!
Author notes
Just a little suttin I thought up
Suggestions are welcome!
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I hope so too Mindie Hunnie!
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so you're getting married? congrats!
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not getting married yet. Just a little poem. Wish i was gettin married lol
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lol. oh. so how've you been?
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I have been pretty good lately! I get the usual hard times but im still smiling! How have you been?
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Excellent Mindie!!
Wow where to begin? The love is just pouring out of you onto the page straight from the heart creates this truly beautiful piece! The thoughts are to the point and leaves nothing to guess about how you feel! I love how you did this. The talent that it takes to do triple rhyming is amazing! You have alot of talent, thoughtfulness, and a great big heart! I love you Mindie!!! I melt as I read this. I cant believe how much love you have to share and I am the luckiest man alive to be the one you want to share it with! You are the best!! You have taught me that love still does exist in the 21st century and I so much want to be a part of you and your life! *love forever* <3 owl
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Wonderful
Such a great reflective piece. So very well expressed. Thank you so much for sharing.
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great little thoughts their..i know someone else that feels the same way ..so lucky him and lucky you....<3 me
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Very cute and sweet words to the
one that you love Mindie! I love the triple
rhymes that you thought up here.
Well done and it's great to read you again
dear! Happy New Year to you and Jaiden!
Take care.
Jeremy0826
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