Breathing in the essence of
the stardust of the universe,
grasping the enormity of our lives—
past, present, and future. Forevermore,
being the eternal song of the stars
and the stardust running in our blood...
I never could quite say how beautiful
everything is. How a stunning picture of
complete love, hope, and joy has been
painted using the gold of the sunrays,
the colours of the rainbow, the velvet
black of space and the shining sliver of stars.
When life comes and hits me over the head,
I’ll be enjoying all the natural wonders of the world,
traipsing mountaintops, watching sunsets, and
touching stars. Imprints left in time and
space due to the living energy we all possess.
Nothing will be over, because what once was, forever will be.
The spiritual journey of our physical beings
leads us to Nirvana, to a place where dreams are
reborn and time does not exist. The grains of
coloured sand sparkle prettily in the crashing waves,
and reality is what we make of it, as the Book of Destiny
lies open to us all; Freewill but a game of dice.
A contest entry
- Desolation or Consolation by Rheea.
1000 points, ended January 10, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best of the best... by Jfd.
1500 points, ended February 3, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~*~Your absolute Best~*~*~ by Night Terrors.
550 points, ended March 26, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Life is so beautiful... not? ;)
Comments
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Great imagery!! I loved this poem
Amazing job and good luck in this contest.
thanks for entering
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I found this to be existential and "hippie-esque".....I enjoyed the pairing of words I wouldn't normally put together, nice work.....thank you for taking the time to enter
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its very good
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Very well done and congratulations on the gold it's well deserved. Happy trails.
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Well worth the gold, so very well written. WASP.
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Life is beautiful and so is your poem!
Best wishes! Although somehow...I don't think they are needed...this one is a tough one to beat!
Once again...beautiful write!
Thanks for sharing!
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This is lovely somehow you got into the blues and guessed my secret? More likely you felt it. This is not abstract art rather earth art. satellite pictures of the earth.
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oh wow char! i am blown away by this piece. so beautifully poetic and vivid imagery. you are so talented. you poetic brilliance flairs here. keep up the amazing work
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I think this is a beautiful and stunning peice of poetry!!!! Very well composed and a true joy to read
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