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Love

Love
It is a simple complexity
That makes everyone stumble
Over their own tongue

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 2, 2009

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    That is very true, love makes us do ridiculous things and most often you just can't describe what it is. Something so strong is beyond words we can utter with our mouths.

    I love the oxymoron there too 'simple complexity'. Nicely said.


  • songstress80
    January 1, 2009

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    true

    oh so true! you just defined what love is at so many times! nice work! oh, by the way, nice touch with using the pink roses like you did with the "beauty" poem. it's almost like the 2 are sister poems..it's very sweet!!!