Darth Vader Denial
Strikes a chord of projection's discontent
Breathe in toxic fumes of societies angst...
Breathe out the waste of malignant scum...
The mask filters the outer mind's mustard gas
neutralizing lethal poisons of noxious thought.
I the wanderer
I the observer
I the dark angel
I see
I hear
I feel
the cosmic continuity of perniciousness
invade
consume
infect
the essence of all being.
The vicousness of virulent venom has created
the malignant tumor of living death
in the existence of shadow.
We die to its daily lethality.
The dark feeds on the light
in the ongoing parasitical relationship
of the prey to the hunter,
and consumes in its hunger.
Ominous.
is the non-future
of many and all
touched
by
the disconnected.
A contest entry
- Anyone UP For A Nooner? Pic Prompt by lunarlunacy.
400 points, ended January 12, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"the cosmic continuity of perniciousness' just gave me the shivers! You also have other lines just as great: "the vicousness of virulent venom" is one. A very dark and worrisome write, with portents of the future. I'd like to give this three more applause, but the site won't let me.
so there!
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this is a wow
black on black
I like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Wow!
This was just as dark as your background!!! Lovely use of words like perniciousness, noxious, lethal, toxic -- whew! Flowed well, and drew to a truly scary conclusion.
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Wow, a stunning piece of darkness! I love where you took the prompt, had me gripped right through. The splashes of alliteration are neatly placed. An awesome tale you've spun, good luck but don't think you'll need it
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Thanks Lady!
I love to impress the Queen of the Night!
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I applaude thee. interesting and profound write while using very engaging language that brings in that extra nuance.
The vicousness of virulent venom has created the malignant tumor of living death in the existence of shadow. We die to its daily lethality. The dark feeds on the light in the ongoing parasitical relationship of the prey to the hunter, and consumes in its hunger.
i like the darkness of this, and the pessimist side of my would agree fully while the core cant help but go "yeah, self, but the balance of light and dark / ying yang whathaveyou has and always be balanced as the cycle of exitence rolls on.
but wtf do we know were all just worm food. LOL
dig it, this outta go far
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