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A Presence

If you laugh at the presence
of remarkable storms,
a remarkable presence
of character forms.

Author notes

picture and quote by: me... Bible verse on picture, of course, not by me... just so
you know. Kevin Pace WordsDoMatter

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 2

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    Very true. This could work both for a short poem and a proverb alike. I like the picture you've used as well, nice and beautiful.


    • WordsDoMatter
      January 2
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      cool

      /// I mean, thath you think I could write a "Proverb"... now thath is a compliment in my book... thanks - Kevin

  • mysty rain
    December 31, 2008

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    What a truly wonderful piece this is my friend. How true this is. Our attitudes do show our character. You are a poet of much talent and your words are always an inspiration to us all. May God Bless you. Happy New Year my friend. Sylvia...aka Mysty Rain