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Nefarious Flames

Your lips like thorns on a rose and your finger tips are as nefarious flames.

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  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    January 12

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    Ah, a fine statement, which I feel has a hint of one or more passages from The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam. Here's a link, in case you may not have read it:

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rubaiyat_of_Omar_Khayyam


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 2

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    I'm not quite sure what that word means. It just shows that even 2 weeks away from A Level English is a travesty. But I love the imagery you present here. Beautiful.


  • songstress80
    January 1

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    wisdom

    just like your other short before this ("papercuts") i must say that you have a very well written short again! good luck on the contest! the feelings you got are so mutual with what i've been through. kinda funny! lol