My life is in bits,
My brain is a mess,
Each day im confronted,
With fear, pain and stress.
My worlds come to an end,
Everythings come crashing down,
My shoulders so heavy,
No smile, just a frown.
My brain is in turmoil,
My heart is in shreads,
I cant cope one more day,
On my life he treads.
Im hurting so bad,
Crying dry, acid tears,
Banging my head,
Trying to remove all the fears.
Please get me out,
Rescue me from myself,
As i slowley distruct,
No longer care for my wealth.
A contest entry
- prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER by serenity silvermoon.
569 points, ended February 8, 100 entries
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I hope this doesnt trigger anything for any one. Please leave me a comment, good, bad, what ever you feel. Just please be a little sensative as they are all true stories about my life so far x
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Well
I am going to try you not feel that way, and hope this year brings you better luck with life and liveing. Like always I give you a hug and tell you that I care.
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Wow. That was great! It flowed really well. Everything went together perfectly!
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