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Fingerpainting The Future


The pigment dries,
the bristles stiffen;
yet no-one can see

the artwork.

A contest entry

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  • AlmostLover
    January 22
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    woops forgot this

  • AlmostLover
    January 22
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    I LOVE THIS. Its short and sweet. Very cute.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 2

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    That's always the thing when you see something from behind the scenes. I like this, it's simple but has a beautiful message.


  • songstress80
    January 1

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    its sad that no one really realizes how beautiful a piece of artwork truely is. people just really don't like to look longer than they have to at something, it's always quick glances. a very well written short!


  • juiicyfruitz
    January 1
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    I have enjoyed your few words as much as other pagefuls of poetry. Simplicity can be beautiful.

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