Hear me whisper these promises
In your ear as you sleep
Feel safety in dreams
A contest entry
- 5-15 Words: Blow Me Away by xxRainbowDawnxx.
600 points, ended January 2, 2009, 96 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think yall?
Comments
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truely beautiful
such a beautiful write...i tottally love it! it's the way we feel we all do for people we love...especially those of us who have children...
i have a son and when i tuck him in at night i feel like he knows how much i love him and that he's safe and feels safe when he goes to sleep
sweet dreams come from this wonderful write...pleasant dreams to all who read this write of yours, my friend!!!

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This is how I feel when I'm with my boyfriend, he makes me happy and feel safe and he's so sweet and falls asleep in eachothers arms, it's so beautiful.


