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and tomorrow is a gift

It wasn't the justice that had kill her joy
The mistake of tomorrow had insecure her

The yesterday couldn't be ignored
The scar couldn't get imprinted

The note couldn't  had left nothing but bleed her to death
It wasn't a degree of law that hadn't been followed

It was the pressure forced her soul back
It was the happiness that she left ....It was the joy she forgotten

Memory of past flourish her to life as the present is a gift and tomorrow is unknown ...

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  • ladybug18ju
    December 31, 2008
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    this could've been a haiku

    it had all the elements of it but it was a little long!