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~ My New Year..


The mist paints a brand new landscape tonight
I stand aboard ready for yet another flight..
Today as the sun bleeds to a final death
I see the year breathing its last breath..
I recall the tears and laughter on the way
The memories gone somewhere far away..
I remember the light, I remember the stark
And the days I was left alone in the dark..
I have found my freedom, my wings are free
Yet I'm feeling so uncertain and so lonely..

As the mist departs, clearing my view
I wish upon the last star
Welcoming the day with a year brand new..


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Yes, still trying to write..

I wish you all a Peaceful and Blissful New Year

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  • Tabzz
    March 21

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    perfect usage of personification combined with pure feelings...!! you are a gem.,never quit writing ok.


  • Grateful
    January 3

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    this is a wonderful poem...your thoughts and words always erupt straight from your soulful heart which carries the dreams to live in a peaceful world! Keep your hope and heart alive within the realm of your pain and pleasure, the peace will come!

    All the best to you...Grateful


  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 1

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    Happy New Year To You!

    This is precious, as your words flow, I feel your angelic soul.. Thanks for sharing your thoughts here to start out the new year my loving friend, and know you are cherished above mere words. Thanks for being there for me, and making me feel so special. Keep being you, and blessing the ones you're around. You are such a blessing to me. I love you so much!

    Peace, Timothy


  • Have left the stage gold member
    December 31, 2008

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    and wondering if all your lovely wishes will come true.I for one hope so. Sounds like 2008 was not how it intended, but then, if it was always to our liking, then how can anyone gauge what really is good? Nice words indeed.