The siren trashes my ear
The screaming pounds my heart
I look right and left and see so many in need
Not talking about us. Its the green plants, the sky, The cloud which forms our planet
My home which is being destroyed
The fumes ignite bring carbon dioxide to my roof causing a hole ,
No one can fix it because we placed a permanent mark
My home which is being destroyed
The caps melt causing the ocean to rise
... Why should we care? we got tall buildings to climb !...
Only few will suffer to drown why should we care? Because..
My Family is going to die......
A contest entry
- Mother Earth by Nymphetemine.
750 points, ended January 5, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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Your words are very true. We really do exploit the cradle of life Mother Nature gives us. However because of your dark background i find it extremelly hard to read the text when it is black. I had to highlight it. Also there is a bit of slang-type writing that I dont take to much.
nevertheless, weldone, i felt the emotion in this x
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Wow that was a powerful write. I really did like this. Our planet and the atmosphere is being destroyed at a massive rate and there is an aura of despair in your poem. Thank you for entering this wonderful poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Yorkshire Bard. Blessings.
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