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My Dad.

My dad is a great man,
full of power,
full of wisdom,
full of spirit,
full of love.

Always there for me,
arms wide open,
showing me how much i'm loved,
showing me how much he cares.

I love my dad,
i'm sure he loves me,
i wouldn't change him for the world,
he's as perfect as can be.

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This is for my AP dad Puppydog

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  • Kookies-Nya
    August 13

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    Reminds Me Of My Dad 10/10

    It's almost as daddy's little girl is the one to get into most trouble and break his heart. I'm not saying that that's what this poem portrays, I'm saying that that's what I think. This was very sweet. My dad always says he loves me but, I always see the hurt in his eyes when he looks at me...Both my parents say that they see the hurt when I hug them...They always glance at me when they argue, and ninety percent of the time, I'm staring at them, but when their eyes meet mine, I look away quickly...I love my dad so much...I don't mean to break him into pieces that are to sharp and jagged to where they can't be dulled...i love him...I really do, and reading this makes me remember how much he loves me. Thank you for posting. Thank you oh so much. I'm glad you have such a generous heart. Truly, you can express how you feel through writing, and you show this very clearly. Come to think of it, you've inspired me to write something for my family members...i think I will.^^ Hope to read another poem from you soon.

    Kookies <3


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    March 5
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    Wish you had a real father more loving liek this

    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • serenity silvermoon
    January 11

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    yeah daddy is very great i wouldnt change him at all either sissy daddy loves both of us very much i know he does i hope he gets to read it if he hasent already keep on writing sissy i love reading your poems


  • She burns
    December 31, 2008

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    How sweet and from the heart, you said it all, I'm glad you have him here in your life, he's truly an angel


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 31, 2008

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    NO WORDS FOR THIS!!!!

    What can one say except that they fee l the same way about you. One can only feel and sometimes cannot put into words just how much another means to them.'s This is deeply appreciated my dear daughter 's ALWAYS HERE FOR YOU 's

  • michaeline
    December 31, 2008

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    You care so much for the one's that you write about.Your ability to show that in your words is awesome.Great job.

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