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abuse me

home...
pinned against the cold hard wall
afraid to move
afraid to scream
tight in his grasp
as his hand slides all over my nine year old body
yank, grab, shove, pull, pushed to the floor
i can't get up!
tears falling
I can't understand it, what did i do?
its over...
school...
"let me walk you home"
friendly voice
flash
alley..
shoved to the hard concrete
scratching me
so rough like sand paper
broken glass
I'm bleeding!
"stop!"
his hands slide all over my sixteen year old body
rip, pull, push, slap
tears falling
why did it have to happen again?
i don't understand what i did wrong!
its over...
boyfriend...
shoved to the bed
a little scared
but excited
"hit me"
"hurt me"
"i love you"
bruised face
bruised body
I'm tainted and disgusting
deserved it all.
Give me more, i grin slightly
as tears stream down my face
 




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  • Nosce te ipsum
    February 10

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    WOW

    such strong imagry! loved it! beautifully written and very intense. you feel the shame and the excitement as if it were your own. this really is an amazing peice. i'm blown away!

  • twisted ending. you were the only one who used both wanting to abuse and wanting to be abused. i like your interpretation and the raw quality of your poem. thanks for entering.