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Within the Forest

 

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Curs this forest for it has taken my pack,

I am but alone in its darkness hunting.

 

Naked I bare what is mine,
while the wind grips me

 

For how am I to survive the cold,

the dark, and lonesome alone.

 

and twirls me into the
laughter of the past.

 

I will travel this forest until-

I yet again can rejoin my pack.

 

Watching days pass
and years lay silently by
.

 

For no three will be un-touched,

Until I find what the forest has taken.


Standing firm as the tides
of emotions batter me

 

Every root that holds a cave,

I will climb in the search.


rain feeds my eyes
the tears of centuries

 

Watching as the forest cried,

Is it for me it shed its tears?

 
I linger in the now
and look for the decade of tomorrow

 

A rushing wind playing I see,

An ancient three and its tears.

 

For as I shed my tears for the lost ones....

I remember what life is all about.

 

 

 

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  • wow...to me this seems deep, and i can't even think of what it really means..but i congratulate you on a very interesting read..


  • daviscth silver member
    February 10

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    I didn't want it to end...
    You drew me right into the story line and I love the picture.
    Thanks for sharing with me.


  • penman gold member
    December 31, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wow, this is great. Such an amazing collab. Thank you for sharing.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    December 31, 2008
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