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My Mother always said

My Mother always said,
"there's no such thing as a free lunch",
and I pondered the sticky words
until picking them from my teeth was all I could do,
because this picnic of a concept
made you seem quite blue.







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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    January 9
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    Oh I have heard a variation of this one too from my mum, well written. Best to you in the contest

  • ea silver member
    January 3
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    O yeah, I heard this one, too, along with,
    "The World doesn't owe you a living."