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stillborn junkie

i don't want to give you credit for being anything more than an asshole, fucking drunk who couldn't cum on the floor after having sex for three hours at a party, nonetheless. and to think that i didn't tell the others how you had a banana- shaped penis, and how you didn't give me head or even have the strength to stand on your own, how i had to hold you up and fuck you with all my own energy as you were stoned beyond measure, all for your behalf for sake of not embarassing you.

i'm telling everyone now that you were the prick who called me this afternoon, ending things and stating that you'd rather me be a one- night stand, even though that was your biggest fear. become rational, you eternally baked fucker and stop smoking every goddamn second of the day. 'free- spirited,' my ass. go back to the fucking city where every other fag is just like you. i'll watch from miles away, drinking on my couch as not even six drinks will help me forget you. i'll pray to a god i haven't seen in years to ensure the seventh one may help achieve relief from your face for just a moment.

damn dreams, your pretty face.

it's true, you were the most handsome of lovers and even with our circumstances, i loved you slightly. i'm embarassed for gushing over just how incredible you are and happy i am to have met you, only one day later to regret my very words.

poor sap, i thought you were a god to me, but instead you became nothing but a stillborn of all my desires.

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hey kyle, i guess i was wrong. go fuck yourself.

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  • autarky
    January 3, 2009
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    your prose is amazing; just reading it kills me a bit


    • birch
      January 3, 2009
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      i am beyond flattered, the most i've been in a while actually.


  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 2, 2009
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    i love you sweetheart.


  • divebar
    January 1, 2009
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    ...

  • vertigo beat
    January 1, 2009
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    birch is strong, though.


  • Phineas Red
    December 31, 2008
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    *insert black lady finger snap here.*


  • chloris
    December 31, 2008

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    but instead you became nothing but a stillborn of all my desires. > what an expression. i have noticed "impulsiveness" (even if it's disregarded by a majority) births the best words or expressions that we fail to write usually.
    [yes he wasn't worth it. now i know what you meant on your fb status...lol]
    and oh i didn't mind the visuals here... perhaps i am learning to be okay with reality these days... i don't "cringe" too much nowadays... lol... random? okay i will run away now.

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