An aura of iridescent blue emanates with
enchanting ethereal serenity, like a beacon
of hope, beaming through the vacuum smile
of eternity, from an orb like presence of
possibility, a goddess of nurture, life's
sacred seed, alive, with perfection's
imperfection, a living breathing Eco system
which endeavors to survive.
We walk upon the miracle, surrounded by
the beauty of her expression, humbled by
her energy, adapting to her cycles of change,
creating a connection through the umbilical
chord that is consciousness, to all that is.
Listen to the wisdom of her silence,
let your heart beat with hers, allow your
thoughts to wander her skies of wonder,
to experience the tranquility of being alive.
Become the aura of iridescent blue,
glow with the love that embraces you.
A contest entry
- Mother Earth by Nymphetemine.
750 points, ended January 5, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wow, your words are so descriptive and really brought me to life. I also liked how your last two lines rhymed...usually i would pick it up as inconsistent rhyming, but it really suited your poem.
good luck in the contest! Not that you need it!
x
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masterfully crafted- this was so eloquently written that i am stunned. the imagery you used here and the flow of your words was quite breathtaking. excellent write- good luck in the contest. -T
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Definately the last lines, but all of it captures mother nature too...blessings in 2009 and um...shine!
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Oh my what a beautifully crafted poem. There is a stillness of the words that touch my heart. I think Our Mother will definatley feel the love and warmth in this write.Good luck in the contest.
Yorkshire Bard. Blessings
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