The omnipotence of my beauty brought calamity
As it captured the hearts of malevolent men
Seen I too many a genocide, a travesty caused by my elegance
I am the eloquent mannequin enfeeble in thy grave
that played upon 3 nations an elegy
Savage Kings at war for the tranquility of my love
The abhorrent slaughter of one nation, one to another reverberates
As generation after generation their heirs seek vengeance
for the decadence of their countries and restoration of their
Descendants honor, I am the lady of war, look what my beauty caused!!
A contest entry
- Could The Eloquence Fall From Your Lips? Can You Expose The Dark Picture? (Can you take it? #2) by SheWasPreternatural.
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"Seen I too many a genocide", " Descendants honor", "for the decadence of their countries and restoration of their" ,"one to another reverberates"
< those lines didnt flow or read right. And the term decadent was used incorrectly.. there can be no honor in decadence. but overall... stunningly crafted and masterfully flowing. well done. -T
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travesty caused by my elegance? wow, how bold? I can see boadocea, in this episode, very warlike feature.nice written,
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Thanks
Well done on yours as well.
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