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Remembering

Forget me not...

by remembering

this is renewal now.


A contest entry

I often see the littlest of flowers as myself, and to simply to remember I have meaning too.

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  • Nice Take!

    This is a fine write for the prompt! Oh...if only people knew that we always need to be in Remembrance of Him & that this is our time for renewal! Love this!


  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    January 10
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    Beautiful. And Sweet.


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    January 8

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    If I was a flower. I like to be a rose because almost everyone loves them. They are my favorite. Thank you for sharing your poem with me?


  • Lukey
    January 5
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    Very expressive. You've said much in a concise write. Well done.


  • HereComesTheSun
    January 2

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    wow amazing.
    a gust of wind with fantastic words that blow you over
    only 9 words that just wow.
    amazing


  • myrataal silver member
    January 2

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    Ah Denise ...

    So concise but spot on! The Word is uncountable in its Rebirth through souls.

    Lovely write, you deep One.
    Love
    Myra


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    January 1

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    A great take on the picture
    Well done

  • creatively clever... x


  • A63-Angel
    December 31, 2008
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    very good! I like this a lot.


  • BonnieQ silver member
    December 31, 2008

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    Perfect

    When I checked out the picture prompt, I thought how perfect your 9 words; for, indeed, the flower will fade away yet will come again, like renewal. Gold, yep, should be gold!

    Luv ya, BonnieQ


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    December 31, 2008
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    Denise...this is so perfect!!!
    It is memorable, truly memorable.


  • Nom de Plume
    December 31, 2008
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    Excellent capture to the pic, wish you luck in the contest

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