gloom
sitting heavily on heart,
crisis after crisis
hitting common man,
bid goodbye to year'2008.
look ahead with hope
take road,
less traversed in past,
let us hope,
wall street's red turns green,
falls on main-street.
bringing three cheers
for homeless, jobless and penniless.
Author notes
prompt: shed the skin you have lived in....
Happy New Year!!! '2009'
A contest entry
- Shedding Skin by PerfectImperfection.
787 points, ended January 7, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Such a wonderful piece of brevity for thought. Very well spoken for the pain the world has endure; hope for all mankind. Nicely done! Thank you so much for your entry & Happy New Year!
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I LOVE THIS IT IS A REALLY FINE WRITE AND A FINE SENTIMENT ARTISTICALLY CREATIVELY PENNED, NICE TITLE TOO
HAPPY NEW YEAR
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Great write!
Happy New Year
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Lovely sentiment for the New Year, but unfortunately greed seems to be the only thing humans ever breed... hope you have a safe and happy New Year...
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