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A lesson from the Begonia

I will, I will, I will

keep this promise

to myself.

Like the begonia cutting

sadly withered but fighting for survival

In that place where charity

asked small change.

I knew I must take you home,

Now you grace the space

where dreams are made.

That silent sanctuary

where time is mine

and mine alone.

I watched you grow,

you discarded your dying leaves;

but there were moments

I was deceived,

when death seemed imminent;

Then tiny shoots

almost screamed their way

into this world.

you grew with a tender touch

and survived.

I will learn  be gentle with myself,

and persevere.

 

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  • PerfectImperfection
    December 31, 2008

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    A lovely piece of hope and determination for the year to come. Great metaphor, with such a unique beauty to weave the thoughts within. Nicely penned! Thank you so much for your entry & Happy New Year!


  • Mary O gold member
    December 31, 2008
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    Such a lovely poetic write. And the last lines left me in awe. Well done and good luck,
    ~Mary O