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Hate Me Today, Love Me Tomorrow

“I hate you”
Your words tear through the air
Like a scythe
They cut through my soul

Silver rings
And I do’s
Mean nothing now
At least… in your eyes

The ashes of our love
Fall oh so slowly
In the grey coldness
You look at me with

I beg you,
I plead…
For you to listen
To your heart, if not me

I cannot let this anger
This fury be our demise
You can hate me today…
As long as you love me tomorrow.

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  • Heroesrox silver member
    December 31, 2008

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    The title was supposed to be Hate me Today, Love me Later, but who cares! You took the prompt and ran with it! Such a beautiful piece. I love your pic, too! Thanx so much, for entering my contest. Best of luck to you!