Dad, remember this field?
(tears)
We planted it together.
Author notes
Picture is your prompt ~ by Brian Jekel
9 Words
A contest entry
- only 9 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended January 1, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I thank you for your comments and applause on this write. However, due to the contest rules please do not add my name in your comment. Thank you very much!
Comments
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This is so sweet and beautiful.So little words but they truely speak volumes.Great job on this and good luck in the contest.
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sincerely lovely... x
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awe..
strong, emotional, all in just a few words, you have amazing talent, keep up the great work.
much love,
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awww very emotional in just a few words
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This was such a moving write! you really did such a wonderful job with the picture, and only nine words too!! bravo!! thanks much for sharing! best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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Fantastic.
An emotionally intense nine words.
Very well done and nicely set out
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Definately with feeling...I lost my dad when he was 49, and that was 18 yrs ago...and still...beautiful memory to match the pic prompt.
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AMAZING
Sad and beautifully written in such simple words!!!!
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