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Come Cover Me

Ink stains on my fingers
And blood in my pen
As my inspiration
Of you invade my senses

To write a tale
Of my midnight musings
I darken the pages
With love’s sweet verses

I still   live an innocent’s life
My heart was once r-i-p-p-e-d , open and revealed
I thought this wound would never heal

But His sapphire eyes ,lights my shadow
His tender touch awakens my senses
And his kisses fill my pen with
Its everlasting ink

As I write the lyrics
Of our virgin serenade

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  • liltulip gold member
    April 15

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    wow

    this is wonderfully written and a pleasure to read...thanks for sharing this with all of us here! my fav part:
    But His sapphire eyes ,lights my shadow
    His tender touch awakens my senses
    And his kisses fill my pen with
    Its everlasting ink

  • Raven Blackwater Greeters member
    January 12
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    beautifully written, poet...


  • Desire gold member
    January 11
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    Ooooooooooooooooh~

    Now this is what I am talking about
    I so remember this image and impact
    Excellent Beautiful~
    Love the energy also pictures You paint with Your words
    Woot!
    Happy to see Your Muse kick in~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • nicely penned an amazing and beautiful write! good luck!


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    January 7

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    Wow, such beautiful words with some
    lovely imagery throughout this piece.
    Well done and good luck to you in this
    contest. Thanks for sharing this here!




    Jeremy0826

  • Mariana gold member
    January 7

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    'Ink stains on my fingers
    And blood in my pen
    As my inspiration
    Of you invade my senses'

    Wonderful use of imagery and metaphors. This is a beautiful poem.

    Mariana


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    January 7

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    Wow. Truly beautiful. I love the images and emotion in this. You did an excellent job.
    Best of luck in the contest!!
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • penman gold member
    January 6
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. A great write. Best of luck in the contest.

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