Spurring fragmented stars from their cells,
Crystalline chambers against the ebon expanse,
The elegant spread of pitch wildly rapped
As red giants burst in technicolor elegies.
Reverberate, oh Heavenly bodies! Emit thy eloquent hymn,
Alluding to omnipotence at thy nebulous cores.
May none be beauty-blind when the travesty rears:
The calamity of ruptured stars, the savagery of death-
And anon, the tranquility of sparkling darkness...
Set aflutter like fireflies at nightfall.
A contest entry
- Could The Eloquence Fall From Your Lips? Can You Expose The Dark Picture? (Can you take it? #2) by SheWasPreternatural.
900 points, ended January 14, 2009, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Loved it
I enjoyed the words you weaved into this piece and like a tapestry it all came together to create such imagery.
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this had such intense energy through out the whole write.. You really did such an amazing job with this piece.. Thanks much for sharing. Good luck in the contest..
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Thank you, Kat! I'm really glad you enjoyed the poem. I look forward to reading some of your work soon, in turn. ^_^
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wow, wow...uh, i think you really overdid this one with....everything... its perfect! i love it, love it a lot. very well done.
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Thank you, Sadpuppet, for your great compliments. Overdoing it is what I'm great at, I'm just lucky when it works in my favor, haha. Thanks again!
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oh.... wow.... this was stunning. you captured sheer poetic beauty and eloquence; and mixed them until they shone like the fireflies at nightfall plus i love it when titles tie into the ending. superb job and thank you for sharing. -T
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Thank you for the nice comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun writing it, so thanks for making the contest and giving me the motivation
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your very welcome... your user name was hidden from me... but i had a feeling it was you thank you for entering and feeling motivated by my contest. i do enjoy your work very much- you are so talented -T
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Thank you, T
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you are most welcome Gab
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